A clunky sentence
Before
I am writing this email in order to let you know that the meeting that was planned for Tuesday is not going to happen.
After · ready to send
Just a heads-up: Tuesday's meeting is cancelled.
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did you do the thing i asked about yet??
Just checking in on the request I sent earlier. Have you had a chance to look at it?
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Put the ask or the news in the first sentence. Background comes after, if at all.
2
Phrases like “I am writing to let you know” and “just wanted to” add length without adding meaning.
3
Awkward word order, run-on sentences and slang that reads as careless at work.
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Better is not the same as stiff. A good rewrite stays close to your length and your voice.
Real examples
Same meaning, better landing. Here is what the rewriter does to messages people actually send.
Before
I am writing this email in order to let you know that the meeting that was planned for Tuesday is not going to happen.
After · ready to send
Just a heads-up: Tuesday's meeting is cancelled.
Before
hey so i was looking at the numbers and some of them look kind of off to me maybe, not sure, could be nothing but can you check
After · ready to send
Hi, a few of the numbers in the report look off to me. Could you take a quick look and confirm they're right?
Before
like i already said, the file is in the shared drive
After · ready to send
The file is in the shared drive. Let me know if you have trouble finding it and I'll send a direct link.
Before
sorry for the delay we had some issues on our end but its fixed now
After · ready to send
Thanks for your patience. We ran into an issue on our side, but it's now resolved and everything is back on track.
Before
can u cover my shift sat? i'll owe u
After · ready to send
Would you be able to cover my shift on Saturday? I'd be happy to return the favor.